Right then... I'll just put this here so nobody has to skip back to the first page to read it...
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So Neil is selling the SAME snakes for $549 shipped while Jewell is selling them for $429 shipped. I am a bit confused since Jewell is selling the SAME snakes for $120 less. And the snakes supposedly belonged to a "J. MENDENHALL". A bit weird that the SAME snakes are being offered by two different sellers at different prices.
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The use of capitalization to emphasize the fact that the snakes are identical isn't needed but people respond to strong language, the emphasis of the term implies that it's more important than it actually is and gives an impression that there is something exceptional and noteable about the fact. While not in and of itself a directly negative impression, when coupled with a few of the other messages inherent in the text it certainly does add emotional impact to the average reader...
The manner in which he says that he's confused... I suppose he might be a bit confused, if I had seen two ads by the exact same poster where the price went up the day after it might make me scratch my head a bit too, but beyond conveying what may be a truthful lack of understanding for the situation, it carries a strong overtone that he is confused about the entire situation along with the individuals involved, the very name of the thread "Inquiry on Golden Serpents...aka Jewell Howard" further helps to boister the impression that he was, until he saw the ads in question, unaware of Jewell's very existance. Rather than contacting the individual as one would tend to do if truely confused or simply creating a feasable possibility as an explination for the situation, he instead chose to create a post wherein he implied that there was something ethically wrong with the ads in question and yes, an attempt to put a slight patina of suspicion on the individuals in question. Even if he had been totally unaware of the connection between these two there are many, far more viable explinations avaliable than wrongdoing on anyone's part... since the ads were a day apart and both parties are in the same area, mabye Neil had bought them at the original price and was reselling them... maybe Mr. Mendenhall had contacted multiple people about brokering the animals... maybe they really were seperate animals that just happened to have similar descriptions... (I didn't get to see either of the original ads, were there identical pictures?) Really now, if you describe an animal just by age, gender, size and who it was produced by, then there are sometimes hundreds or even thousands of animals fitting the same description... Would anyone think something was really wrong if two people were both selling one year old trember line albino leo gecko pairs for seperate prices? Since Sean was aware of the buisness relationship there are still numerous possible explinations that should have come to mind first, perhaps one ad was a typo or they had discussed the price after the initial ad was placed and had worked out a more profitable but still quite reasonable price... And maybe, just maybe someone without a nasty suspicious vindictive manipulative mind wouldn't have even noticed.
The word "supposedly" before Mister Mendenhall's name and the quotations placed around it strongly imply that there is a suspicion that either tha animals didn't come from him or that he doesn't exist to begin with, again, the wording, while not directly accusatory gives an enormous impression that there is something shady, illegal or immoral going on here when that is not the case in the least.
The entire post, while not overtly accusatory is obviously a fairly poorly worded attempt to convey an emotion and cause an identical emotion in the reader while leaving the writer free from any direct blame for his words. Had he done it better or with more care, it wouldn't have been as obvious that he was trying to do so but this fairly crummy attempt at a subliminal communication of an emotional response is easily seen as what it is. If it hadn't been this crude, it might have been more effective too but as it stands, the only people who were swayed by it are those not quite bright enough to see through it.
If Sean still wishes to maintain that it was an entirely innocent posting despite it's fairly obvious nature, let him do so.
The only difficulty in that and the continuingly mounting evidence that shows it to be contrary to the case... Is the fact that he hasn't and won't apologize for the misimpression (which he claims is the case) given to those who read it. Anyone who was honestly making an innocent inquiry because they were interested in doing buisness would immediately have responded with profuse and sincere apologies for the mistake. That didn't happen and I'd wager it won't ever happen... That leaves only one option, that the post was in no way innocent, that the wording and the impression it gave were deliberate and that Sean, for whatever reason, was attempting to cast dispersions on the character of those who he wrote about. He can't have it both ways, either it was innocent and he apologizes, or it was deliberate and he admits it and maybe tells everyone why he felt it was needed to write what he did in the manner in which it was written.
Getting off that topic just a bit... Casey, I'm not real sure what you meant by that, I'm not taking any offense, it's just early and I'm a bit slow right now.